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[>>e l e c t r a ; ;]

Okay, first of all, let's talk describing!

describing
verbs and more;;

'he said, she said, they said.' It's annoying! Use some description! Like, for example, say, "Hi!" Electra hrred to her friend excitedly. Okay, putting that aside, you have to describe your actions. !-Example-!

Electra walked over to the stream. She drank from it.

That was extremely terrible.

Electra seemed to dance over to the trickling stream. She bent over to lap up some of the icy-cold water that slithered down her throat

Perfect. It was awesome! I could picture her perfectly in my mind. Now, why don't you try? Give it a shot and reply to this!

[in order to make a hundred words, I'd suggest you post all your questions and describe immensely. If you still don't have it up to one hundred, post your song's favorite lyrics! ^^][/size]

[Twilight]

Twilight raced through the pink morning sky excited for the day. Her petteness(hehe. ....spelling) made it so she could race faster then bigger dragons, and swifter. She loved that about herself.

Her silver-blur scales sparkled in the the morning sky, and her big black eyes absorbed(sp) the brillant colors.

As the sun inched its way into the new day thesky changed colors Oranges, Pinks, Purples.... it was breath taking....

Twilight loved waking before the sun for this reason. The color show. Even though she was an ice dragon she loved the sun too! She couldn't live without it!!

(Hows that? Please give me feed back on how i did !!!)

[ivy]

Ivy's wing twitched involuntarily as a drip of morning dew planted a kiss on it. The dragon's eyes flicked open as she began to stir. She groaned as the smell of rain filled her nostrels. This meant it wouldn't be a good day to fly.

Another day on the ground, Ivy thought in annoyance and stretched her stiff muscles. She spread her wings slightly and shook of any dew that may have accumulated there.

Ivy shook her head, knowing she couldn't resist the urge to spread her wings more and ride the wind like waves. You stupid, stupid dragon. You never let it go.

Pushing off with powerful hindlegs, Ivy took flight into the clouds. She closed her eyes as the wind whipped by her face and ran over her wings. She loved the feeling of air. Her element.

(hmm...on a scale of 1-10, wat would u say? 1 being bad. 10 being good)

[>>e l e c t r a ; ;]

Twilight;;
Good. I give it a six.

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Ivy;;
I like it I give it a six also. :3